Thanks for your feedback guys, I'm more worried about the transition. In chapter one I outline everything the main character intends to do to...
actually, I would like to start my flashbacks whilst the main character's parents were still alive. The day of their deaths. Then go into the...
Hi Everyone, I'm new to writing, I'm only one chapter in and I'm already stuck :P My story starts out in the present, my main character is...
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