Thanks jazz. I actually just made some changes per your advice. And your comment has made me think about a global audience and how some one not...
jazz. May I call you that? I love jazz music. I certainly understand your comment on that line; "You have become quite a handsome young Black...
This is an interesting topic. In the novel I am currently working on, Tony Clayton is a young black man. He lives in a mostly black neighborhood....
Ok, I looked. Just scrolled down to read about the authors. I have it figured out. They are in Miami. I can't believe no one here figured this out...
I'm glad I read all these comments so I am now saved from reading any of it. Thank you very much.
I do in my mind. I try to think of how they perceive things in situations I put them in. Is this a scary place? Do I feel safe here? Should I be...
I think you understand. But I do not know.
I have been reading up on James Joyce, Kurt Vonnegut.. How they broke all the rules and as the book says, they got away with it. One Author, Kelly...
Hey mista'. You wanna' buy some watches? ..I feel anything to show, even dialogue, is correct. Remember, their are no rules!
Thank you, I appreciate it.
My main is a mans man. I do need to solidify him though with conflict. When his wife was fatally shot, he fell into alchohol to cope but after...
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