I would absolutely love to! Would it still go in the General Writing forum? And I think I'll de-constructively criticize it myself first to lesson...
Great! Thank you guys for the feedback. I also felt like the "thick, heavy" was too much, but couldn't think of anything to replace it. I...
It's from the main character's POV, he's just received the sword, and is cleaning it for his father. This is what I have so far: He inspected the...
Hi, I'm new to this site, and am need of some assistance. I'm writing a story, and I've gotten to a part where I need to describe a sword, but I'm...
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