Thanks for everyone's advice, and I guess I'll focus more on the real plot than the background. To answer a few things: -A few South American...
Sorry about the posting my quick work here too soon. I didn't know, and it was a spur of the moment scenario.
Alright, to get to the main points, my story is modern-sci-fi POV, a war story told from one Private's point of view, and extends for around ten...
I have some slight experience doing POV: Suddenly, I heard a loud thud. My legs froze and my torso locked in place for a split moment before I...
Hey, just found this place on a random surf. It looks pretty neat, and I hope I can get a lot of good info here.
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