It does get heavy, awkward, and starts to sound like 2nd person. Who says she isn't? ;) ;) ;)
Precisely. HOWEVER... I was writing some more scenes in this voice and it really started to feel confusing. Even with some additions of the...
[praise.gif] All the kudos, my friend. All the kudos. The wiki definition definitely sounds more like what I've been writing than anything else...
Thanks for the link! I would never have guessed it was 2nd... though that seems obvious now lol. I always see people saying to not ever use 2nd...
I've been writing something in First Person, which works very well for the story as a whole, but there was something that I just didn't like about...
Some of my friends already know this is my pen name, but your reasons are the same as mine - awkward surname, and separation. I am going to keep...
Titles themselves are legally safe. That much I know.
So that's why I always come up with my best lines when I'm trying to fall asleep. :D
Interesting idea... This will actually be the first year I can work on it (was too busy previous years with grad school and currently have no job,...
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In some cases, explaining the process is half the fun (and interest). Especially in cases where the character is learning how to use the magic. I...
Definitely traditionally. Who knows what they did to get away with it. At least lyrics is one thing I try not to even consider, no matter what!
I've seen time and time again that including song lyrics in a novel/book is a big no-no without written permission and/or buying the rights, but I...
Would physical laws include chemicals and hormones? Figure out which naturally occurring chemical in the body can induce a coma/unconsciousness...
Separate names with a comma.
