Thanks alot for the help everyone I will try everything you suggested.
Thanks alot I will try what you have said. But in places like school and stuff like that is there anything you would suggest that may get...
I'm new to writing but know how to tell a good story. There is one thing I can't seem to get. How do you get someone to even read your story?...
Cogito is there anychance you would reveiw this part of my story? It seem you have alot of experiance in this matter and the more veiws and...
I'm truely sorry if I offened you in anyway by my writing that was not my intention. This chapter is just one chapter most contain no violence at...
I'm sorry if this chapter seems abit dark but that is what I was going for. This is the part of the story where Hani my main character lost his...
As requested here is the chapter I'm working on just got finished typing and the beginning will most likly be changed. The style has been improved...
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