You are right on LostThePlot--bring out the personality as it is needed, In the story .
Way back in nineteen fifty nine, four of us left a neighbour tavern in southeast Oakland - was around ten in the evening. We were on our way back...
How about tossing the adverb, and describe your possession of the picture; such as: My picture, my work of art, graces their website.
Just who is this guy? He didn't just drop into your story. Did he grow up in an aggressive uninhibited family environment, filled with reinforced...
I believe the whole point is to tell the story. And I have found, myself shifting to 1st person when my POV talks directly to another character in...
Jonsey said, as he stood watching his friends Billy and Joe squared off to fight. "Hey you two knock it off!" Billy said, "Stay out of this...
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