Haha, thanks guys. Looking back over this, I see what you mean. Well, it was only an idea on the spur of the moment. If I become motivated, I may...
Well what I was thinking is that their human side wants to be good, but the demon part wants to be bad, so they're at war with themselves over...
To the OP, Wreybies post reminded me of something that might help you. It's not hate, but as a real life experience, I have a friend who reminds...
Well, this might not work for you, but I for one have fun writing characters who are smartly rude to each other. So not things like "you idiot"...
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