Actually, the worst critique you can get as a writer is none at all. I'd say, every critique is valuable. Yours is especially valuable if you...
Well, it depends on where you set the story, and for which readership it is planned. Depending on that, a story doesn't have to be plausible or...
Sounds right to me... And, if I may add, I would really like to read your Novel :) I wouldn't worry about the body-count. Hamlet, e.g., is a...
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