Almost all English villages have a church, farm(s), one or more pub or had a pub, had a shop (I say had because a lot of village shops have shut...
Could the nurse see something or someone while on her break or something similar. Could see be going to retrieve something from her car or maybe...
It seems that you may need a small something to happen on the journey so the character can react but also say that previously I would have reacted...
From looking at the house picture you have posted posted to me this appears to be an old English house (pre 1900) with no basement and it...
As a lot of newer writers or newer members (not always the same thing) often struggle to know how to do a 'satisfactory' critique or know what to...
Some times the information is known to the characters at a different time (usually earlier) to the reader. Then briefly discussed or hinted at...
While doing my own family history research I have found that the information you get back from a lot of the documents is effectively bullet point...
When a tag is needed, which it isn't always use the basic ones like said, asked. , etc. If the tags sound like you are regurgitating a thesaurus...
You can show location in multiple ways - ! The simple/ obvious of In Portsmouth I went to a cafe. The coffee was weak but expen, or so many of the...
As far as I know it is quite hard to get a job in a museum, especially the job you really want. It's a job most people stay in for years, though...
If Jason is wondering the streets where is he looking to stay and how does he react to others? Is he rude or abrupt? Is there someone with him or...
Glad to hear the suggestions have helped. It sounds good. Maybe you'll post something in the workshop soon?
As you will have noticed everyone has their own editing techniques and over time you'll work out what works for you (and your story.) I edit as...
I like your example above of discussing people's reactions to the songs but what about how she feels about sharing the song(s)? Is she...
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