^ I concur. Subtle is the way to go. The thing you want to do is to blur the lines between friendship and romantic love. With them being...
He doesn't actually seem like a hero at all. A traditional hero is made from his will to fight for the greater good against injustice. An...
Thank you very much for your opinions and advice. All have been noted :3 Then a specific answer: I thought about this myself, actually....
It hurts the reading, mostly. Referring to the protag as "he" all the might might get confusing/boring really fast. I can't really recall a story...
IMO it is not, but I am worried about reviewer backlash, so this is probably as good a place as any to ask. The short version: Jesus was a...
This actually depends on the tone you want the piece to have. If the animals-turned-human are just for symbolism, it's acceptable to omiss some...
But evil actions do come out of good intentions. Then the "heart" is "good" but the action is perceived as "evil". And that is the gist of it....
The former is better, because it allows more character development. The character struggles against his stigma and still tries his hardest to...
Usually coming of age-stories have the protagonist unable or unwilling to accept the responsibilities of becoming an adult. He is afraid, unsure...
So, here is the deal. The first chapters are the most crucial when trying to reel in readers. But when you are setting up the story, the first...
A few questions! is the point to have the readers second-guessing their sexuality or their love for each other? And does the prince himself...
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