You're close to your characters, that good in the respect that you probably know them very well. However, you can't get precious about them. If it...
Currently going back and forth between 'The Shadow of the Wind' by Carlos Ruiz Zafron, and 'The Crimson Petal and the White by Michel Faber....
If there is going to be bridges linking two continents there needs to a purpose for them. Could there be something that e/ach of them had that...
How about fire? Any physical being can be destroyed by it. It is effective and cleansing. Historically used by the clergy to to purify the...
The film 'Inception' leaped to mind when I read your idea. It's an interesting idea with the Knights and Kings, for a unique twist. However, I...
I think if I were to edit as I went along I would never see the end. It already seems to be so far away. I accept I can do minor changes, but...
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