I definitely do have a lot of research to do. All these comments really helped me to consider what to do with my character. :)
Thank you very much for your help. :)
Thank you for your post I really appreciate your suggestions. I will definitly think about it. Thank you. I appreciate you suggestions I have a...
Good point. But the truth is she is coming right from the airport to her fathers company as he urged her to visit him right away. She hasnt been...
I cant do what you suggest as the main story is not about Daniel and the MC.
She doesn't change her mind about him at all. That is not what I wanted to do. So what would you suggest? I could make it 4 years as the first...
You are making a good point here. Another thing I had on mind was that she would blame herself for the attack. What I mean is that she broke up...
It is actually about revealing the past, also I dont want the reader to know that Daniel is a psychopath right from the beginning it would ruin...
Thank you for your post. I get what you are saying and you are definitely right. Let me explain because I didnt want to go in details in my post....
Thank you, this is what I needed. I think I am gonna go this way in describing him.
Thank you
I am struggling with description of an ex boyfriend of my MC, lets name him Daniel. She comes back home to Los Angeles after years and when she is...
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