Ah that too is an excellent point, thank you! Describing details and the lack of an effect they have compared to how they normally would really...
JayG I was hoping to address another question toward you if you don't mind. In regards to that link and the pattern of (Scene) Goal, Conflict,...
Excellent link, thank you :) Green door was just a point of - I'm not describing unless it is relevant to her grieving. Grieving generally leaves...
Thank you Nicki! Very insightful. In my writing, my character has to identify the body and proceed to tell the deceased's family that the...
My character is the narrator and is currently numb, heart-broken, mourning, etc. Unless it somehow is relevant to the mourning process (IE The...
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