Wow thanks so much, I definitely like the way she writes!
Thanks a million guys! Wow @peachalulu that's a lot of suggestions. I have some reading to do :)
Strangers who comment on other people's weight. You don't know them or their story and a stranger especially shouldn't bring up weight. People...
If I'm perfectly honest, I don't know what you mean? I don't need ideas for my own descriptive writing, just books to read. :)
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