Oh that. That came about when I pasted the sentence twice by accident. I must have left 'the' in when I deleted the second sentence. Give me some...
Have you ever seen Bitter Moon? I think of that film when I read about your characters chemistry. If not, rent it out and watch it over the...
Is he honest? If he's honest. Honest enough. Then that will breed respect which can blossom into something else. For that to happen his honesty...
I'm finding this a tough one to answer, especially since I don't know the characters. Words like "control freak" and "jerk" don't exactly make...
Re-reading Interview with a Vampire. I finished it earlier but found it to be pretty overrated but I wanted to give it another shot.
Getting back to the subject though I do think a sticky would be a good idea. I understand different publishers have different requirements but...
What's nonsensical and mad? The sentence?
One of the things I think I could do, to show and not tell is have Bob do something like: 'Bob puffed out his cheeks wearily, his body long...
Garmar created a thread in Gen. Writing which quoted me, but that was more discussing Show vs Tell as opposed to my question about the passive...
Not at all. Knock yourself out. I'll explain what Bob has been doing. I'll keep it simple though. Bob is a policeman who has been called to a...
I'm being really honest and not sarcastic at all, but I did wonder if you people had a spreadsheet or something that you updated. I told you. I...
Oh of course. I think I reviewed about 4 or 5 pieces of work before I posted something of my own. I was just curious of keeping track :)
I wanted to ask how I can keep track of my own story:review ratio. At the moment I think we're allowed to post one story per two reviews. Also,...
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