And when I want to write Brian is angry? Is Brian’s face turned red and his eyes narrowed. He looked like a volcano, which was going to errupt.
Magic is just science we can't explain.
Ok. Your tips are pretty nice. But when are the details too much? When it doesn't move the plot forward and just beat around the bush?
Well… It’s no secret that Show don’t Tell includes senses. And describing what the character sees is easy. But how about tasting, hearing,...
@Partridge I thought of a futuristic cyberpunk thriller where the fem hero – a cop – joins a deadly challenge to find the host of this impasse.
There is no real difference between first and third person. Althought many people think there is one. Those people actually meant the deep point...
I think, it's too much if the dialogue fills a full page but didn’t move the plot forward. The dialogue is a tool, which has to be used carefully.
NA is the short form of New Adult. So, instead of teens, college students – or those, who wants to become it – are the heroes, @Cave Troll And...
@Partridge I try YA, NA and Thriller
Dialogue is important for a story. Dialog is a TOOL for an author! It animates scenes. It shows the personality of Character X and Character Y...
@Just a cookiemunster Thanks. <3
Hello! I’m MythicMirror. I’m an author of fantasy, science fiction, and horror. But I like trying new genres. Of course, I want to publish a book...
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