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Naomasa298 replied to the thread Good evening.

If you're curious, you can start a thread on it and see how different people do it.

Naomasa298 replied to the thread Romantic Tragedy - the Three Types?.

Some of my stories include romance, but usually, it's either unrequired love, or the third person in a love triangle, the one who gets...

Naomasa298 liked Seven Crowns's post in the thread About the Workshop - what kind of critique are you looking for?.

Yeah, I agree. It would be nice to know where they're at in the revision process. Correcting any lines in an early draft for them is not...

Naomasa298 replied to the thread About the Workshop - what kind of critique are you looking for?.

One of the issues I have with pointing out minor SPAG errors in the Workshop is that these works are mostly drafts, often first drafts....

Naomasa298 liked Seven Crowns's post in the thread About the Workshop - what kind of critique are you looking for?.

I've never seen any board really explain exactly what level of edits are wanted. Hmm . . . this might be different than the level of...

Naomasa298 replied to the thread Good evening.

EDIT. Oops... wrong thread!

Naomasa298 replied to the thread About the Workshop - what kind of critique are you looking for?.

That's beyond the scope of this thread though.

Naomasa298 replied to the thread About the Workshop - what kind of critique are you looking for?.

I don't usually do sentence-level critiques unless it's a recurring problem in the work, but if I do, I'll just do one or two as an...

Naomasa298 replied to the thread About the Workshop - what kind of critique are you looking for?.

This. I've had this several times on this forum and others. The worst is when someone says "I would write it like this..." and can't...

Naomasa298 replied to the thread About the Workshop - what kind of critique are you looking for?.

I've never heard of Word doing that. Are you sure?

Naomasa298 replied to the thread Romantic Tragedy - the Three Types?.

Sorry, I'm not familiar with Chinatown, and I'm not sure from your post what the third type is.

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About the Workshop - what kind of critique are you looking for?

Having spent quite a lot of time doing revisions now, I have come to a conclusion. Posting work to the workshop and just asking for...

Forum: Revision and Editing

Naomasa298 replied to the thread Hi all!.

Very interesting background! Welcome to the forum @Kenny73!