The story is written. What I need is outside opinions on my work. I feel it is missing something. It's similar to avatar however more goes on in...
The main character is Ashtar he is a humanoid alien from another planet. The story takes place off-world. His father wants him to bread. However.....
My issues ... off world problems. Half of my book takes place on a different planet. The story contains comedy,danger and dinosaurs. The story...
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