This sounds like an awesome story so you're going to need an awesome ending.... maybe the antag can well, kidnap the girl duh, but have the protag...
According to Microsoft Word 2007, its right... I don't know how it just is... So I think your fine with either the colon or the other one...
Straight from the depths of Hell itself, a fierce, fiery creature known as the Ninetails come out from the ground from a new born fire. Out of the...
Separate names with a comma.
