I don't think you should worry much about length, especially for the first draft. First you get the story out, that's the main thing. After that...
That's in part why we like to write, I think. We have a lot to say but we don't talk much. And it's always a pain to try to explain things you...
Do you have a concept or an inspiration or an event that happens which defines your character? If so you can collect your thoughts around that.
I agree with all of the above. What you wrote is just like an outline. Little distant dots that need long lines to connect. You can question...
Writing process is not the same for everyone. Some need to start writing immediately, some need to plan out throughly even it'd still change a lot...
Make him the competition? Villain of the villain who wants the same thing? Series idea is not bad also, main one can be the villain for the entire...
For one, framework is not your story. The story is yours already. Also if it's your first try at book writing I wouldn't recommend using time...
First of all, hello everyone. :) Now to the critique, in all of three I like the first one more than others. It does have some issues like others...
Separate names with a comma.