I think present tense that works, has to work for a reason. I dislike reading present tense myself because usually it's a choice and does not...
Thank you for all your input, guys. I've written the first part and I managed to avoid cliches. Hurray for me. Lets see if I can continue the...
I also think you're just giving chapters titles. Nothing wrong with chapters, or titles. Do your thing and then see if you like it, it's nothing...
If you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree you'll be very disappointed
People aren't "done", ever. So why should characters be? That's why we give them arcs, that's why we experience through them all the changes and...
From a google search I found: He could have hallucinations: hearing footsteps and voices or seeing flashing lights and nothing being there....
Thank you :)
Maybe you can incorporate the intricacies of relationships in there, some of the little dramas, insecurities, routines. Might add some substance...
I've decided to go with the full blown version, something that spans over the course of the first four chapters dedicated to her. That's exactly...
Yes! :) That's exactly what I'm doing. She already struggled with the idea of "normalcy" in society, it's something I will dig deeper in to as the...
I don't know what to tell you, but no, "crazy people" sometimes know they're not alright. Most of the times, people with schizophrenia know...
Thank you very much for your input @TheWriteWitch , I appreciate it. I think I will keep going with that draft then, and see where I end up.
Thank you :) Yes, I'm leaning that way too. I'm thinking a bit of both actually, my favorite draft is the one where she starts having the first...
On a rut! My MC is struggling to make sense of what's real and what's not. For the reader it can be both, depending if the reader has a more...
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