Thank you for all the suggestions guys. I think I may go into the part after the MC is arrested like you said crucifiction, and adding a person...
I've always been one that thinks characters make the story and so when I had an idea for something I wanted to write most of the plot was fueled...
Frank knew a talking sea bass who could fly. One fine day, he decided to try to fly. But the weather wasn't conducive to flying machines, so he...
Yes I'm new. I joined mostly because I enjoy reading. I occasionally write but it takes a lot of effort for me. My main interest is actually...
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