In case you are still looking for other advice... Well, these are my guidelines when it comes to crafting sentences: 1. Don't expect to fall in...
Am I? Usually people tell me afterwards that they didn't understand a thing but that it sounded great :) Not sure what you are asking me to...
I am not sure whether it's a good idea to mix the POVs. Your "narrators" have a different level of knowledge (omniscience), therefore it's almost...
To me, English is the secondary language I am most fluent in. It's a bit like "switching" the button on and off. Whenever I hear English, I...
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