Thank you guys. That's a unanimous nope for editing on the go then! I shall persevere.
I used to spend too much time on a football (soccer) team forum. I told myself to just stop going on it, but still found I'd end up browsing there...
Looking for some advice on how to proceed please. After extensive plotting, I wrote my first act of a crime thriller, just over 25k words....
Funnily enough I am reading the Institute by Stephen King and it leapt to my mind when I read the OP. The protagonist is 12 as well and very...
Make her drive an electric car. Those things are dangerously quiet.
Yes definitely. I'm now thinking there may have been a drop off for most of the kids so the kidnapping plan makes a lot more sense.
These are my concerns. I think I've justified it by just having the antagonist as a complete psycho but that's seeming more and more like a cop...
Wow some great ideas. Part of the plot is that he always wanted girls and has a son who he mistreats, but I love the idea that he has had...
Crisis of conscience Ill or dying relative. I'll keep thinking :)
Thanks for this. I have addressed some of these concerns but not others so it's really useful.
I'm 10k words into my story and I'm a bit worried about this. A quick run down, My story starts with the antagonist deliberately crashing a...
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