I see, thanks for the advice. The scout doesn't matter, but the captain does. He is an ongoing character and I did try to expand his character as...
I mean, if putting the main characters well being and the wellbeing of their family by putting a gigantic Golem their way is not how you raise the...
It is directly relevant to the plot though. Like, the soldiers, the Golem and the main character will meet up in probably like the next two or...
I've planned it so the main villains only appear in documents and journal entries. Not as actual people, so no.
The soldiers meeting up to form a strategy with the main character is not meaningful enough?
Because the golem literally only got there like half a day ago in an isolated forest/mountain area. Only the soldiers know due to patrols. I...
My mistake, I'll clarify. The Golem wasn't actually in the scene. It was a footsoldier, a scout, that was reporting back to his captain about what...
To set up the next part of the story. I am currently writing fantasy and wanted to establish the power range of an enemy. In this case it was a...
Hello guys, it is my first time posting on this website, but I had a question about world building. Aside from the main character going about...
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