Thanks for the comments, I'll definitely check Alfred Hitchcock's movies. @punkyeleven This was just an idea. I might even make a few chapters...
Sure, they kept him in the dark exactly for that reason. He had no contact with them much & and it wasn't precisely public knowledge he was their...
Yes, but he wasn't involved with them. They were away quite often so he basically grew up without seeing them much.
The main problem with naming the MC is that ... I haven't decided yet! Haha. Yeah, it sounds like a problem. I haven't really decided but...
Anyone? Still thinking about this one, didn't write much. :)
Yes, @The Bishop. I've thought about that and came up with an interesting solution to that without changing my text too much, since in my original...
I've recently written this scene, which is not the actual beginning of my story: a few chapters away from the opening. Here comes the general...
The title "Ancients" sounds very good.
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