I guess i should start off with saying that any moderator can feel free to move this is I've placed this in the wrong section. I've come pretty...
Thanks for the replies. As of yesterday, i have started rewriting the whole thing as i had come to realize i was making too many stupid mistakes.
Thanks for the feedback and straightforward answers. I've asked some authoritative people on the subject similar questions and they just responded...
I'm pretty new here [i think i forgot to add an introduction thread] and i need some help with some crime stories. I've been working hard on an...
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