I'm writing a story that revolves around people surviving the aftermath of the world becoming a gridded globe of 2x2 mile (at sea level) areas...
As I said, Westfall only changes gravity for humans. Structures still have normal gravity, as do plants and animals and water and the like. So in...
Yep! The "Fishtank" square I described is in fact directly west of "Westfall", and so the 100 foot barriers around the Fishtank serve as the...
So my characters have a problem. The story has just started, and an event that will come to be known as "Gridfall" happens. There's a massive...
I have a main villain in my story who has the ability to touch any flat surface and "seed" it with a portal, and he can pick any two surfaces he's...
Keaton: Ryan was... traveling with Akilah, Derek and Taylor? And he was my age? (turns to his companions) But you didn't look older, did you? And...
Keaton: You... wha... this...? (Keaton closes his eyes for a second) Keaton: ...I... think he might be telling the truth, guys. I can't get a...
Ryan: Well, as much as we've appreciated the chance to stop and catch our breath, we'll have to keep going. Later, everyone. Taylor: Yeah, nice...
(Taylor suddenly gives off a bout of reflexive, humorless laughter.) Taylor: Aha! Aha! Ahahahahahahahaha! Yes! Yes it did! I won't dwell too much...
Akilah: I mean, you can look at it this way: I'm overspecialized. Aside from strength and speed and healing and stuff, this is the only "spell" I...
I mean, you'd only be calling him that in narration if that's what the character mentally still calls himself at that point in the story, right?...
I don't see an issue. This is a pre-social-transition flashback if I understand correctly. What exactly is the concern? That covering his life...
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