Ok. Lots of great suggestions here. I'll keep all this in mind as I write. Thank you guys very much for the feedback
Haha! Love it! Marvel influence strikes again
So, I'm currently finishing the outline for my first fantasy installment of a trilogy. In this first story, the hero (let's call him Bob) has...
Don't worry, you don't sound like a nag. I'm loving the feedback (not used to it). I don't think I can communicate my vision without putting the...
The reason for this POV choice is that Andrew technically is the main character (or primary protagonist). The reader can gain a much more intimate...
Maybe, instead of Hockey, she is leaving fencing class (she's a proficient fighter) and uses her skill against the robbers . . . Just a thought.
Also, this is a sample of the beginning on the book, an interlude that Luxes uses to begin the story: Listen, my children, and I will tell you a...
Wow! Thanks guys! This is all very helpful. Wonderful to be getting so much feedback. To address some questions: Luxes and Andrew are...
Don't use them personally but plan to have them in my books. Not an avid fan, but it's a good place to start research
As far as how she gets there and back, you need to establish the rules in your world. World travel opens up a whole new avenue philosophically,...
They were generally carried using a shoulder strap that slung them around and behind the carrier. Gotta love Wikipedia! A crossbow is a bow...
I am in the process of finishing my first book. The issue is that what is now one book used to be two books. Both books initially follow two...
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