I'm told that Jane Austin NEVER has two male characters alone in a room. She avoids this because she has no idea what two men would talk about in...
I've had military officers name one or two underlings and the rest are just "extras" who are addressed by rank. "corporal, I want this perimeter...
The maginc system sounds great, I think you've got the makings of an interesting world here. I'm interested in the main character and the plot...
Yeah...I like dark, but disturbing dark is maybe going too fay. I liked Seven, I'm glad it was made, but I never want to see it again. The Road is...
Sorry, I'll never use yellow again...
One last thing, what happens in the end? The last person standing might be alive on the planet, but what can they do about getting home?
some written sex is laughable I have sex scenes in some of my writing but I try to present it in a way that allows the reader to learn something...
Magical eyes and scanners I like this idea, but rather than having the energy "bleed" though anything they could cover their eyes with (e.g....
characters we empathise with I don't remember who said it but the line is "always put your characters where they would least like to be", and...
Motivation This sounds a lot like the Fritzl kids with magical powers. A lifetime in a basement meant they developed their own language, and of...
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