Ah, I didn't think about the pilgrims of that time. They were more strictly religious back then. But since it's just a small background scene and...
So I see, just sticking with what I have is the way to go. Thank you all for your help! :)
I need help making sure I have some curse words best suited for back in time, like hundreds of years. I'm writing some back story scenes of my...
Oh, this is helpful. I'm not discouraged, I'm more kicking myself that I didn't think deep enough. I can see her definitely having trouble to...
Ohhh I see! I don't know why I didn't think of that. Yes, she did grow up with her parents seeing the abuse for years on end at her mother, and...
Ah this is helpful. For her I do have that they were abusive in front of her, mainly her father going after her mother. And the one incident that...
So one of my betas said in her report that my FL needs more fleshed out development and one part she mentioned needs more was the background...
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