If you look at the way 'real' people get their way with others, they typically are very good at 'reading' people. Body language has a lot to do...
Your MC could have involved himself with his ex's family affairs. Maybe she doesn't get along with her sister/mother/brother and he approaches...
You have to think about what else in the story is capitalized. I read something that capitalized body parts, names, places, ceremonies, etc. and...
@Homer Potvin I personally don't care for Maynard's wines. They're very harsh on the palate and the tannins are to high. It's good if you're into...
The screw caps are nice if you don't finish a bottle quickly after opening it. Which, I can't say I have much of a problem with, ha! For those...
Hi, ELeFloch! You've come to the right place. Keep going with that first draft, you'll get there.
Welcome! Looking forward to having you. Hope you learn something to finish at least one story. Good luck!
Hey guys! I'm a developmental editor and I hope I can add a little to your thread here. Basically I can let you know how I work and how a few of...
I think the use of 'it' is more natural sounding. I've tried saying it out loud a few times, and it's easier to say. Because it's dialogue, it's...
Love it!
That's great. I think most of us here are in the same boat. Good luck!
Eh, don't worry about it. We all need to rant once and a while. So here I go...I think it's great that you'll be fresh with no rules to follow...
Wee babe, eh? Please tell me you know who your Avatar is. Wait, did I just date myself? Anyhow! Welcome!
Remember that a crime and a thriller are practically the opposite. In a crime novel, the crime has already happened and they're trying to figure...
Haha, Infel! :D The way I understand, it is either part of a series or one of the first plot points.
Separate names with a comma.
