Answering your question, you chose a great outlet for depression or conflict in life. Sometimes when I wanna flip out a write a letter and it...
You write very well for a 13 year old and seem very bright. My nephews are 9, 11, 13, & 14 and your point of view is completely valid, although...
Write one of your favorite pages in every tense. See which represents the feeling you want the most. Which feels right? For my genre Dark Fantasy...
You're right. I could never except money to give up a passion, nor would I give any freedom or act of free will up for five million dollars. Take...
Yes this is a show vs tell issue. Also Active sentence vs. Passive. You're saying that instead of "The woman was sitting in the car..." that you...
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Ettina, Exactly, a character needs to change through lessons that represent the theme or they change through whats called "pressure change" -- a...
The comments that 1rst person POV changes are harder is very true. In third person you can switch from Omniscient to Limited and swap limiteds...
Rum, Like Steph mentioned I agree and my son is 3 but you're right--psychologically we are all an extension of them--in their mind. Thats why...
Sure but you stated this is a protagonist. Any main character good or bad must be round. Just because she may be allegorical or symbolic too...
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I like blue sounds boring, or maybe Clearwater << denotes no movement. I dunno.
I agree with peach. Kids are not flat, they fall under a different psychological rule set. If you look at child psych you can see the stages and...
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