I loved it, actually. Funny, satisfying, and cool all at once. The writing is good and the whole thing seems well executed. Not a cheap cultural...
OP, thank you for creating this thread. I haven't done any rewriting here, but I tend to do that with what people hand me as an English tutor in...
@aikoaiko I think they're dead wrong. To put it succinctly. And having read a wide variety of genres, it's clear that the style expected in each...
I have my reservations about the efficacy of this, but at this point, I think I'll give it a shot. However, Novemeber is essentially my last month...
The best stuff always comes this way. The stories I have to force are always the ones I have trouble continuing. The best ones seem to drive...
Why on earth is he going through her journal? If this is connected to your other story, I'm guessing he's trying to discover something she's...
I never read much fantasy, and my whole fictional universe was originally set in the real one, but with a kind of hidden undercurrent of alternate...
Oh, definitely. I've been writing since I was a kid, and the progress I've made in quality is almost unbelievable even to me. Unfortunately, I...
Hey, thanks. You as well. :) And I'm right there with you on the delivery problem. lol. Frustrating, isn't it, to be full to bursting of all these...
What I would do is try extending the summary. Try fleshing some of it out more. That's not to say you can't have some summary, or faster...
Ah. I'm stuck in a similar conundrum with needing to set up a whole universe before telling the stories I really want to tell in it. Not saying...
I agree you seem to have a good story, especially likening and mixing up the high of drugs with the high of this doomed relationship. Only, I do...
Well, you should probably change that, lol. Seriously, I think you're overthinking this, worrying about something that isn't really a problem....
@GuardianWynn All right, now he definitely sounds like the kind of man I'd like to read about.
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