What do you think of this? Detective Lynx Wu will stop at nothing to capture the Magician, a woman who steals and sells the rarest of magic to...
Here are the main points I got from your pitch. I've cut it down a lot, based on feedback I got for my query. Renegades is a YA adventure novel...
Thanks, fellow swashbuckler! Yes, this is just the template I will use for each query. I've been researching agents and will add specific details...
Thanks for the feedback! Who knew that a simple letter would need so much tweaking..?
Some minor edits to add more 'voice': John craves adventure. That’s why he ran away to savor life on the open sea. Yet here he is, just a common...
I had some feedback - here's version 2: John craves adventure. That’s why he ran away to savor life on the open sea. Yet here he is, just a...
OK, how does this sound? John always longed for adventure. That’s why he ran away from his grand but dull home to savor life on the open sea in...
I like it. The phrase "turn[s his] whole world upside down" is a bit of a cliche and doesn't stress the stakes enough, nor what Henry risks...
Agreed. I've tried searching queryshark and I'm personally having trouble navigating it.
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