If he doesn't like his father, then why would follow his father's orders 'just because he's his parent'? Someone who doesn't like their...
Here are the basics. There's a lot more to the government than this, and I've done as much world building as possible to figure it all out. The...
I normally try to come up with a vague outline of the character's personality first so the name suits them. Then it depends on the story, e.g....
I didn't realize how much work I still had left to work on. Thank you so much! This was extremely helpful.
I completly agree. It's true that the protagonist doesn't have to justify his devotion to the government for the other characters. Almost everyone...
I really should have explained the government better. Sorry about that! Each Tier has their own economic purpose: 1st Tier: The creators of...
Thank you for this feedback! I never thought of viewing it like this. Answering your question about the protagonist's father, he was a higher...
The character becomes more sympathetic. The events that take place reveal how people inside the government actually work. But there is a huge...
In my current work in progress, I'm having trouble with the main character's reasoning for his blind belief in the Dystopian government. Currently...
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