I'm losing focus, I need to concentrate- take a moment to contemplate, lean back and smile, listen to the words that pour from her mouth. I...
Thank you Mckk, that was an excellent rewrite, that improved upon the original in many ways. Particularly the last stanza, "I cannot see Past...
Another version for you Maklahi. I hope this appeases some of the comments you'd made. I think it sounds a lot better, so thanks again! Time is...
I went with lay because of the whole "falling into the past". The idea, which I've obviously failed at executing correctly, was I wanted to...
Time...is creeping along, and I can feel myself sinking. Falling deeper, slowly submerging into the stillness of the cold night air, the...
You want to say something good, you want me to write something enthralling, captivating... ...but I want to write something because...I need to...
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