Seconded. Magic and technology is closely related. New Technology will be created to adapt to the existence of magic in the form of coexistence,...
Of course not lol. I like some of the antagonists more than the protagonists in my story. As for tips, well, make them as compelling and...
Hmm.... it's not a bad idea. It's something i probably would read. But i do have a few questions though. She eventually decides to return to her...
Agree with this. Well, killing characters with meaning means that they have to accomplish something. Here's a few i can think of: 1. Characters...
Well it depends mostly on the character's personality, morals and resolve, and u know him better than i do, so what do you think? Although From...
I don't get it. You said that he wants to go back to protecting the innocent, but if he's working for the police doesn't that mean he already does...
Maybe you can make the title a symbolic one based on your own theme/story/characters etc. Like: "The Order: Worldly Desires" Or "The Order: The...
Honestly the dead-parents-at-the-beginning trope is so overdone that nobody cares anymore, so don't expect most of the readers to care about the...
How about making an acronym like the MEP (Memory Erasure Procedure) or something similar to this?
Exactly. Now that we know some of the villagers have their own motives to become turncoats, it's up to you. What will you do with this info? What...
First, are the people in that village siding with the conqueror? Do thry think of them as tyrants? Do the town guards actually want to follow the...
Hmm yes it's closer. Not completely close, but closer. I think it's like that. Distant is from the outside looking in and Close is from the...
Let's see what i can think of: 1. People who are completely different from each other can eventually become used to one another and can learn to...
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