I guess my concern is that while there are obstacles that are over come on the MC's "quest" those threats and obstacles all exist within their own...
Try grouping your points into scenes or chapters. And then looking at the arc of the scenes. Does it tell a full story? Are there interesting...
There should be some links even if they are subtle. You want to leave clues for the reader to discover and theorize about. That way they can...
While not a female character you should take a look at Kevin Spacey's Character in House of Cards. He is ruthless, manipulative, and ambitious...
So I'm working on my second fantasy novel. I've got notes for most of the chapters written down and a few chapters written but I'm wondering if I...
The poisoned candy doesn't work because he feeds a small piece to his pet bird as a treat and then gets distracted by other things before he can...
I can't believe I forgot the staged accident. I even have it jotted down in my original notes. I just hope you realize that this means I've...
Most of it I keep in my head. But I have found a word doc/wiki an incredibly useful organizational tool. Whenever I'm reviewing what I've...
In my second book I have a character who is trying to murder the main character a 16 year old prince. The assassin is trained in infiltration,...
It all depends on how you want your golems to be. Golems as I recall were generally slow and moving puppets that obey whatever orders they were...
Well if he can absorb and generate lightning then maybe he has a kind of natural faraday cage around him that stops the lightning strikes. While...
It's actually less then that. If you look at Amazon for instance they pay either 70% less data cost or 35% of the sale price and then you'll have...
When I was younger I worked on multiple projects and never got very far with anything. But I think my IT background working in a KanBan...
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