@ Funky - Great things for me to think over. Thanks!
His uncle is aboard as well as a few other 'lords' / higher merchant class folk. Their 'after life' belief is that the spirits of loved ones look...
Guess I should have put in some back story: Volcanic erruptions / earthquakes have destroyed ----- (world's name). The king has been killed,...
I think what Elgaisma suggested is perfect for a private person. Besides, it uses the 'show don't tell' concept that is SO pushed today. We...
Just that, folks. My MC goes through a traumatic experience that leaves him in the pit of despair. What are some practical means of...
Count your blessings. At least your muse is alive & well. Mine needs a swift kick in the @$$.
If it doesn't add to the character OR the plot in some way skip the dreams. They're wasted words & there's no point to them.
We're NOT the ones deciding. We're just offering ideas to trigger the writer's own imagination. Haven't you ever gotten ideas from someone else?...
No prob. I'm available.
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