Now that I think on it some more, I think the impact would actually be greater with the "I thought you were dead" route. Plus with the immortal...
Does nothing happen in the first fifty pages? -No. Something happens in the first chapter, which sets up the rest of the story. Is your main...
Thanks for all your input. As for the immortal character: I rewrote a couple chapters so that it's a sort of Gandalf thing, where no one expects...
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It's definitely not in the first chapter. The first one is halfway through, during a skirmish. They bury her and move on, and she comes back a...
...is often done for dramatic effect. But does it cheapen the death if the character is brought back to life? Some background: Two of the main...
Since you're leaving his fate ambiguous, the characters reacting to his 'death' should clue the reader in that he's dead. So when they find out...
Like that, I'm guessing. :friend:
Yo. So first of all, thanks to @Imaginarily for showing me this place. I'm Tony. Been writing for some time, but i fell out of it for a few...
Nor does action mean exciting.
Likewise, the Greek hoplites used spears and swords together. The Spartans in particular fought with spear and shield, and used swords in closer...
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