Like others have said its your story so you know how it would work better. However if you want to add a third pov strictly to show the love...
I am, or will after my rough draft is done anyways, dealing with the same issue more or less. I have about 5 povs, and to keep things linear...
I agree with everyone, you probably shouldn't keep mentioning her smile too much, but if you do need another word, how about Smirk Edit:...
Well now you understand my desire to always want to try and fix it. I feel as if the rest of the book will suffer because of it. However, I do...
Thanks Mammamaia. But I don't believe all my writing is bad. It happens, sometimes as a sentence, sometimes as a paragraph, or even sometimes a...
thanks everyone for the insight..you are all awesome as usual
Thanks both of you. I kind of figured that I needed to stop "writing every day" but I just read a lot about writing, and most of them say you...
Hey all, Been working on my first fantasy novel for quite some time now, but mostly due to long breaks. I'm currently sitting at 35, 755 words...
It's kind of funny, the story I've been writing is about a true heir to the throne, who it turns out isn't the heir afterall, wasn't the kings or...
I am kind of the opposite, I get other ideas, but I can't act on them until I finish (Or perhaps..toss) my current one. I write these ideas down...
I've yet to read that series, perhaps I should! I have been reading the sword of truth, Shannara, and Codex Alera series'. I will add that...
I am writing a fantasy novel, perhaps I should have mentioned this. I have read a lot of fantasy novels with a lot of pov's, which is why I...
Well you have to start somewhere, and you are well on your way. You can easily expand on that. How about taking a time out, and delve deeper...
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