Actually I was writing to the OP, but thanks for your interesting reply. The reason those pieces read fine as poetry is because they ARE...
The music is the whole difference. A poem is meant to be recited (or read). A lyric is meant to be sung. The music adds emotion and context to...
I learned it's a lot of hard work to write a story well. Ideas are a dime a dozen and the "rules" are well known (i.e. show/tell, strong verbs...
Witches cauldron - someone gets a plain bag of ice cubes instead of dry ice? Macbeth's Scottish accent reminds everyone of James Bond / Sean...
How does this fit in with the moon tube, the "dancer", the horse trailer, two headed Bob, and your non-fiction book? GoldenGhost is right....
I thought we were looking for a cost effective solution? Yes, I see where you're going with this. Excellent. Then you make the therapist...
We had to watch this video in school. It's something only Bill Cosby could pull off. Google on: bill cosby on prejudice 1971 youtube If...
I say go with a Fahrenheit 451 kind of plot twist. You have the tube get clogged up by a futuristic RotoRouter gang that goes around clogging...
Five votes now - and all for different stories!!! Anyone want to cast the deciding vote? One day left.
Found this site. Really, really cool. I can put my writing up for review and get real people to tell me how to make it better. What?...
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