Personally I'd kill the "which is, in fact," part and just go with: "Did you forget that unique characteristic of rain? Wetness." but to...
Rapid-Deployment Multi-Use Space Station (RaDMUSS) Mobile Array General Use Station (MAGUS) General Use Mobile Marine Orbiter (GUMMO) General Use...
This. What I was trying to illustrate is that if the narrator is talking about setting, and what he's talking about is in the same state now as...
Are you talking about something like this? If that's the case, then really either tense is fine, though it does make more sense (to me) that if...
Well then... I'd pull the whole thing apart and write a paragraph about what you actually mean. If you want to talk about how "really not that...
I'd reword the whole sentence. Something like: The first few times you enter combat or cloak really aren't that bad. OR The combat and stealth...
I would think that a sixteen-year-old would almost ALWAYS be tried as an adult for homocide. It really depends on the circumstances of the case....
If you go to the main page of the forum, look to the right and scroll all the way down, there is a box that says "Newest Workshop Posts." It lists...
You know, that falls into this weird category in my head of "Classic movie that I've seen parodied so many times that I basically know what it's...
All of these word counts are nice guidelines for how to categorize a particular piece of writing, but they should have no bearing on what is...
AC - The biggest reason to critique is to help your OWN writing. When you read a piece, you will notice things that strike you as effective or...
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