Thank you so much for all this advice! I am fourteen and hoping to get somewhere with writing! Every comment and tip is unbelievably helpful. Thanks!
Lillian never saw that side of Charles before, she saw an entire other man. Any description of their father from Basil's side is foreign to her....
He is a very bitter person in general. I have done minor research on PTSD and wrote it in as the MC being an insomniac and his mind shuts down at...
What would be a better way of say it?
I am writing my first novel and am having some difficulties. For starters, the MC, Basil, has been through a lot of mental trauma and I want to...
In my opinion, odd would be something like characters thinking in complete sentences, almost no-one does that and any story containing that sort...
Basil: I have been through a lot in my lifetime and I am only 28. I run a bookstore called the Attic and I have maintained it for the past couple...
Exactly! I'm glad someone understands!
I have to have my fork, knife, and spoon the same length or else it throws me off.
Some of my tics I would rather not discuss here. (I suffer from Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder, so a lot of things that I do are strange.) I do,...
Separate names with a comma.