you just gave your character more depth by giving him a washed up appeal judging by your quote. good way to go with him he may appear the same on...
the uncle begins the boy's journey he is only present in the beginning minus reference later to him. he isn't a side kick he is more a primer....
no four is not too many. if one i a less unfortunate person the story may have some more contrast and more depth, it would also give you more...
the big 50 cent words don't ever seem to impress me because the people who use them are typically bad at proper use of them and of simple words....
this is a great point, and i tell everybody that i talk to about reading, that in a movie you cant understand emotion unless you can read the...
i find the more powerful male names are one syllable or two with a hard consanint as the first letter, but the last name is the power that is the...
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