Good point. i won't put the wheezing in dialogue. Thanks!
How would one write the verbal action of wheezing in dialogue? Weird question, but I need this. Lol.
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If I'm reading someone's work and they are constantly using swear words, I automatically think that they are either young, inexperienced or both....
I think the third would sell best because it looks more mainstream.
Separate names with a comma.