Well, it sounds a lot like writing a Dungeons & Dragons adventure, with perhaps different rules. Since you say it's also a card game, it would be...
I went over my manuscript and notice it's buried in just's. I can eliminate some of them, but I don't know how to alter others without changing...
Browsing roleplaying rulebooks sometimes helps with creating your own magical systems. http://www.sjgames.com/gurps/books/thaumatology/...
So we all know Jack Nicholson's original infamous line goes like this: Woman: "How do you write women so well?" Melvin: "I think of a man, and I...
Actually, that's my problem: too many but's. I need to start striking them out, and maybe replace them with however's. XD
Separate names with a comma.
