I added an edit dealing with this. I was answering only your disagreement before that, check the italics at the bottom.
Then you are saying that more dimensions = ALWAYS necessary, well, in a story you would enjoy reading. Anyway. I disagree with this. That several...
Of course I'm recommending it. The Dothraki are one dimensional. They follow the Khal. Big whoop. Fascinating read, chum. EDIT: They have to be...
The irony being that 3, 4 and 5 are broken in Lord of the Rings and A Song of Ice and Fire. Two bloody good fantasies (especially where $ is...
You don't need to worry about the God being pretentious, you just need to worry about being pretentious to your reader. (topkek)
Wouldn't Diocles be a more authentic name?
Not enough restrictions on the creature. If you cannot restrict a beast, then it is overpowered and far less feasible, and if there are not good...
Give them a damn good reason for being sick and depraved monsters, no one is born a monster. The problem is... your story probably isn't about...
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